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    August 08

    A Saturdays walk

     
    The city streets seem like a zoo
    So I pass by the city zoo
    Crossing a new found bridge
    I glance down to waters below
    Noticing a leaf taking a ride
    Wish I could hitchhike by your side
    Passing to road ahead
    I follow my  friend along the river bend
    Twisting and turning but moving along
    A little town appears beyond
    I stroll it's quaint little tofu street
    Then hang around for  just a peek
    My companion calls me from the shore
    Take your journey to the seventh floor


    12:11 AM | Blog it | Poem

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    No namewrote:
    what a nice journey u had! (Louisa)
    Feb. 5
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    fawn wrote:
    pretty nice poem~
    wish you a exciting life!
    Sept. 10

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